We're not allowed to use color for this project, just black/white/grey because he wants the focus to be on the words. What do you mean by line breaking though? Space the lines out more?
Well, there’s a couple of options - one is that you could break from the horizontal all together, and follow the music; there are some parts of that song that do things like lift and drop, that have a heartbeat, etc. Also, think of interesting ways to say things; like when the phrase is ‘there is love in your body’, try putting the words ‘Love in your’ INSIDE the word body. etc.
I sketched out some stuff - obviously this is the roughest thing in the world, lol. XD It’s just the beginning of the song, but you get the picture!
I also have AIM if you would like to talk more about it. :D I’m (accidently answered this publicly, so I will privately message you my AIM name. :P ) (portfolio, if you’re insanely curious, is at http://asoehnlen.com )